Book Review: ‘The Sword of Kaigen’ by M.L. Wang
Reviewer: Michael Vadney
The Sword of Kaigen by M.L. Wang is an enthralling blend of modern and traditional storytelling that immediately immerses readers in a world where the past meets the present. From the first chapters, the novel skillfully showcases the vast cultural differences within the same country, setting the stage for a powerful narrative about family, identity, and the dissolution of a way of life.
The story introduces us to Mamoru, a young boy struggling with the erosion of his world in the face of modernity, and Misaki, his mother, grappling with her role in a traditional family. Wang masterfully uses flashbacks to enrich the narrative, weaving in detailed memories that deepen the characters and their struggles without bogging down the pace. Unlike some other epic fantasies where layered flashbacks can become confusing, here they are clear, relevant, and add significant emotional weight to the present storyline.
Wang's prose, particularly in action scenes, is tight and precise. The movement and combat descriptions are vivid and easy to visualize, which is no small feat in a novel so heavily focused on martial prowess.
The world-building is another highlight, seamlessly integrated into the story through dialogue and context rather than heavy-handed exposition. Chapter 5, in particular, stands out as a masterclass in organic world-building. Even when the novel veers into info-dumping, it does so within the framework of the story, making it feel natural and necessary.
However, the novel isn’t without its flaws. There is a noticeable and jarring shift in point of view in a few sections. The transition from third-person limited to omniscient narration, particularly in the revelation of Misaki's glass sword, feels like a misstep. The sudden change in perspective disrupts the narrative flow and feels like a narrative shortcut, which stands out in an otherwise tightly constructed story.
Despite this, The Sword of Kaigen delivers on its emotional depth. The story of Mamoru finding his purpose and Misaki realizing the importance of her own identity within her family is both powerful and poignant. The raw emotion of Chapter 20, which nearly brought me to tears, is a testament to Wang's ability to convey the human experience in its most intense form.
The novel’s conclusion might seem to drag at first, with Chapter 30 feeling like a natural endpoint. But as the final chapters unfold, it becomes clear that this extended epilogue is vital to completing the characters’ journeys.
In the end, The Sword of Kaigen is a profound exploration of family, sacrifice, and the clash between tradition and progress. M.L. Wang has crafted a story that stays with you long after the final page, making it a must-read for fans of epic fantasy.
Michael Vadney is the host of the Author Adjacent podcast.
